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Thursday, 28 May 2020

Ashlyn poem

For writing we did another poem and this poem was about yourself (me). We had to describe our self and what we feared, loved, wanted and so on.  
I enjoyed this writing because it was quite fun.
How would you describe yourself.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Ashlyen
    I like the way you explained about your self.

    What i think you could do is make the writing bigger so its easier to read.

    But i like it

    Good job!

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  2. HI Ashlyn. Love you little poem about yourself. I got to know you better just from reading.

    Charlie.

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  3. Hi Ashlyn,
    I really like your poem,
    I think its really cool that you come from Samoa

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  4. Hello Ashlyn,
    i love your little poem it explains a lot about you and helps people get to know you better.
    - Daisi-Mae

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  5. hi Ashlyn
    i like your poem it is very interesting and I really got to know you better
    Latayah

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