This weeks writing was all about space just like our reading was. I chose to describe what my planet looked like.
My writing:
Pshhhhh, I landed back on my planet. I took one step of my small rocket. pink stardust surrounds my feet, well the rocky ground crumbles. Shining comets pass by twinkling and lighting up the dark sky. The rings that surround our world are made out of thin ice, ice as thin as glass. The mist travels far and wide, it flows with the wind too. The wind brushed against my face as the mist passed me. Here back on my planet. Home sweet home.
I enjoyed this weeks writing because it is my favourite to describe.
What would your planet look like?
Hi Ashlyn!
ReplyDeleteMy planet would be purple and blue fading into each other with a ring around it like saturn!
I like your describing words and how you write Home sweet home at the end of your story.