Hi Ashlyn Another excellent week of learning! I love your narrative! You chose to use a onomatopoeia to hook the reader into your writing and it was very effective. I can see you also undertand about viewpoints and correctly worked out which view point the reading work was written from this week. Well done, Miss Hudson
Hi Ashlyn
ReplyDeleteAnother excellent week of learning! I love your narrative! You chose to use a onomatopoeia to hook the reader into your writing and it was very effective. I can see you also undertand about viewpoints and correctly worked out which view point the reading work was written from this week.
Well done,
Miss Hudson